Renshu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Outlaw pt.1]

Good

Too much tweening, not enough real frame by frame animating, your camera moves need easing in and out to be more compelling. But you did use lots of good viewing angles in your camera direction.

Tweened shortcutty animation is used predominantly for fixed pov animations where everybody stays pretty much on the same visual plane. Or cute cartoony shit.

Nice work with the guns, but don't rip off Pan's Labrynth anymore. Dorks like me will see your attempts and yell at you for it.

BiffTheTimid responds:

In part two, Brooks is going to draw a square in the wall, and its going to make a door open to a different world, where there's a monster that eats children, or anyone that eats the food on his table. It will also take place in spain during a civil war.

[Happy Ninja Day]

Wtft?

This looks like a school project. BEGONE!

Shadow-Hyren responds:

Thats what it is you dumbfuck. Read the description.

[Resident Evil: Quack EDTN]

HAHAHA

FUCK YOU SCISSORMAN! He got what he deserved.

Tanuki-Go responds:

:P

[Tin:The Incompetent Ninja]

How the HELL did you pull this one off?

Damn, brother.... I didn't know you had it in you! This was freaking hilarious and really well animated! Of course... that's why you're the Dave.

SnafuDave responds:

Dude Renshu "I" didn't know I had it in my either. But seriously tips from you and Wayne helped a TON especially with the music. And this is VERY dependant on the music. So yeah thanks!

[FF:NewDestinyThePrelude]

I like...

But take a black rectangular graphic symbol, drop the opacity to like 30 something percent, and slap it under all the white narrative text so it doesn't blend in so much. It was hard to read ze story in contrast to the backgrounds. Good stuff, though!

SquareHard responds:

yea, ill do that for next time, but in the next one, there really wont be too much narrative, most of it will be chatting and fighting, hehe, thx for the review

[FF:The New Empire Part 6]

In the world of the future....

Fanfics have been replaced by flash movies....

WAVEOFTHEFUTURE, I SAY!

That just dawned on me, thought I should share. Good job anyways!

Tootbook responds:

WAVE OF THE FUTURE! lol thanks :P

[The Swf]

More like "shlock crew"

You've got very good smooth animations and very swell graphics, I must say. But I might be on the outside of an in-joke or thirty.

pooopooopooopooo responds:

" Shlock Crew " how witty =/

[thats our saddam 08]

I liked everything about it...

EXCEPT THE STOLEN PEABODY JOKE. However, the NON stolen Peabody jokes I laughed at. So overall, great job!

mortimernova responds:

what's up with everyone and freakin theft??? steve brought to my attention the joke had been used and it was too late for us to correct it... such is life i guess...